آموزش نگارش Writing essay در آزمون IELTS + رایتینگ نمونه سی و پنجم(۱۳۹۵/۹/۱۷):
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نمونه 8 میباشد.
from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some
people think that it should become easier for them to study at universities. To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is acknowledged that students from suburban areas find it tough to receive
higher education. Whether it should be made easier for them to access university
education becomes an ongoing concern, which incurs a highly-charged
higher education opportunities bring about benefits to students in multiple
ways. For example, to receive higher education becomes increasingly
important to senior high school graduates, partly becasue it
determines if they have the competitive edge in the job market, and partly
because it is seen as a guarantee of a certain level of the mental ability, from
the computer literacy that is required by the most employers to the capacities
of acquiring new knowledge the soonest possible which is valued
by the most workplaces. With a university degree, students from
rural areas will obtain a job easily, thereby bettering their living
conditions and their family as well.
education also, however, tend to impose a heavy burden
on their families since the relenting rise in the tuition
fees which are -increasingly beyond those families’ ability to
afford. In addition, with the mounting evidence, a university degree is not
always a guarantee of seizing a decent job; therefore, their living conditions
are likely to worse off by not able to earn back their tuition
fee after graduation. In this way, some people argue, students from
rural areas are not well-advised to pursue a university degree. But I perceive
their desire to further their education should not be disrespected and the
government should subsidise them to receive higher
conclusion, university education should be made fair to everyone, predicated
only on their academic performance and mental abilities, rather than their
financial capacities and the government should subsidise those students in
comment: Not all the parts of the task were covered. The writer’s position is
relevant to task prompt, the main ideas are also relevant but not all of them
are developed well enough. The information is presented coherently, it is
evident that the writer progresses from one idea to another.
words and phrases are used in a correct way. The range of vocabulary is
sufficient here. There are some attempts to use more sophisticated words but
many of them are inaccurate. Even though there are some errors in grammar and
punctuation, they don’t make the meaning much harder to understand. Overall,
this essay seems worthy of IELTS Band 6.
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